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Hesitation;
the sweet justification
of wants thrown
across unprecedented notions.
The misconcept of knowledge,
knowing what was truth
mixed with what emotions
beg to conquer.

Progression;
the changing identity
of a black-haired girl.
No longer the person
you knew back then;
and yet still is.

Manipulation;
the game tossed
from one end to another.
Foolish wit rolls in
like the ball rolling into court;
decisions.

Possession;
the heart congests
memories into vessels.
The dreams of unsaid visions
tossed helplessly into the horizon;
unused.

Irritation;
Like the piece of the puzzle
that keeps falling out of place;
missing.

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Author's Comments

It's kind of hard to describe this one. It's kind of like wanting something you've had before, be it forced out of your grasp or intentionally let go of; but there's something holding you back from getting it..because you don't know if it's what you want or because you simply want it cause you can't have it anymore, or have this ideal about it.

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:iconmoondrunk:
~moondrunk Jun 25, 2009, 11:37:38 AM
i thought i knew
what the poem said
but then i read

--
"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
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~blbabe Jun 25, 2009, 5:29:08 PM
The description is a little hard haha. Just couldn't really describe the poem properly.

--
xx Lady of Sophistication

"What I noticed is this:
I come up with something new..
every single time
that I sit and reminisce."
- Part of the list
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~moondrunk Jun 25, 2009, 6:44:36 PM
well it's me and you blbabe, back against the Guggenheim!
just us dark folk: The Living Children of the Sun....by the way what does blbabe stand for?

--
"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
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~blbabe Jun 25, 2009, 9:01:03 PM
It's an old nickname (use a different one now) which I derived from two nicknames I had when I was younger. I hated those two nicknames but since it kinda defined me, I thought I'd use its initials, b.l.

I use one which is nicer but I'm a bit too lazy to make a new account so yeah~

--
xx Lady of Sophistication

"What I noticed is this:
I come up with something new..
every single time
that I sit and reminisce."
- Part of the list
:iconmoondrunk:
~moondrunk Jun 26, 2009, 12:24:20 AM
so your two nicks are b.l. and babe?
who in the heck calls you babe?
no, don't answer that, i'm stupid

--
"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
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~blbabe Jun 26, 2009, 3:30:01 AM
It's a common general thing, like darling or sweetheart, or chick haha. A few people call me that XD

I prefer iladys tbh.

--
xx Lady of Sophistication

"What I noticed is this:
I come up with something new..
every single time
that I sit and reminisce."
- Part of the list
:iconmoondrunk:
~moondrunk Jun 26, 2009, 9:26:45 AM
iladys...like ipod or ill-lady?

--
"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
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~blbabe Jun 26, 2009, 4:56:51 PM
Lol. Like ipod. It's a mixture of my initials as well as a nickname of mine haha.

--
xx Lady of Sophistication

"What I noticed is this:
I come up with something new..
every single time
that I sit and reminisce."
- Part of the list
:iconmoondrunk:
~moondrunk Jun 26, 2009, 9:14:21 PM
oh
it also could be blackbabe too

--
"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
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